Custom clone.

[Cali]

So I attempted to wander into Thunder-Blades realm of mini figs. Here's the result.



The Flickr set.

I thinks it's pretty good for a first time. Kinda first time anyways.
C&CC welcome.

[Galagoo]

I think it's really good, actually, especially for a first time. The edges of the sharpied areas are rather clean (mostly, at least), and as far as I can tell, you haven't cross any outlines. Accurate work, overall, and pretty cool design, too.

As for criticism, the sharpie work on the helmet, mainly on the fin, doesn't seem to be as smooth as on the torso. There are, for example, some white spots visible on the edges of the fin, which increases the unclean look.
In addition, the sharpie paint itself looks uneven - meaning that some parts are darker than others - but I assume that's the case with all sharpies.

[CoR3Bu]

Love it! It looks great, better then what me and my friend used to do!
The edges are perfect, and I like your choice of color.

Colonel Reaginal Bulstrode, to attention men!