It's not a bad figure, I'm really liking the face/hair combo.
But I'm not keen on your choice of torso piece. Katarn was never really one for Jedi robes, or at least, he wasn't in anything I ever saw. I know he is a Jedi (kinda, I suppose
) but in everything I've seen him in he's always in a dark trousers/funny tunic with shoulder pad combo.