[Star Wars] mini republic invasion

[Blackninjatom]

Well I did enough rambling on the other page so I will keep this short...ish. This is my first diorama, and it is way over due, but I am fairly happy with the result. Also I have new spider droids down toward the bottom of the page.

pic is a link to the mocpage.

[Artizan]

this is a great work, almost all of the models are very well designed, the bunker in flames is a very nice touch too.
however, landscape looks as if it needs to be worked on more, also what's with the giant battle droids running like dogs?

edit: i noticed the mini speeder bike and fell in love with it

[Blackninjatom]

This is my first diorama, so I definitely will have to work on that in the future. They aren't "droids" they're Diords (droid spelled backwards), just wanted to add some wildlife, and thought that could be a random pare of "droids" gracefully leaping across a pathetic creek amidst the conflict... or something like that. I will see what I can do about scenery in the future.

[roguebantha]

Nice work. I like those tiny spider droids and the bunker is pretty funky. A bit more geological relief would make it even better.

[Jake]

Pretty cool, although there needs to be more landscaping, it's a bit flat as-is. Maybe embellish the bunker too, add perimeter walls further out and so on. Looks good though.

[Blackninjatom]

I will do my homework, actually it all is , and hopefully come back with something better.

[Jedd the Jedi]

I like it, it's in an effective scale, is visually arressting and employs various nifty building solutions. However, the landscape needs a lot more work. Were this a drawing, it would be a very rough sketch. The individual components need to be more integrated into the landscape and I know you're trying to convey several different environments, but it might work out better were it more even.